The Official Writing Challenge
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This was delightful, I enjoyed your colorful characters very much! Lots of fun stuff in this story.
Loved the satire of this piece! Especially the opening sentence. Keep writing.
What a fun story - I enjoyed reading it. I like the way this person developed the characters.
Totally fun! I loved the request that the smokers and chewers spit on each other! Great job.
I love the whole story, but especially the way it ended. Since it ends with Ed's snort, it leaves the reader enjoying the camaraderie as the main point of the story, not the yarn itself. I felt like I was there.