The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/07
Very interesting piece! It made me smile! :) It did seem a bit weak on topic, though. I'll probably think more of my toes for awhile, anyway! :) Good spiritual message, too!
Interesting idea... though it felt like it ended before I could get my bearings as to where you were taking me. Maybe more of your clever insight into Mary's pain before going to see her?
02/24/07
I like the lively monologue between "me, myself, and I," but I sort of have to agree with the previous commenters. It seems you might have more to tell regarding the "craft" part of the story---or maybe we aren't getting the drift? Anyway, you do have talent and you give us an entertaining read. Thank you, too, for your comment on my "Sidetracks" story---I sure appreciate it!