The Official Writing Challenge
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Very true and I liked your encouraging way of writing! Nice work!
I really like the 180 degree turn around from your first paragraph to your conclusion, and the chain of events you lay out in the body of your piece.

My only suggestion would be to work on punctutation. When you use ellipses, no other punctuation is needed, and you only need three dots.

This is clever and thought-provoking.