The Official Writing Challenge
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I really like the perspective. This has such potential, don't give up on it. The dialogue is very insightful and realistic. Thanks for sharing this insight.
05/11/07
A nice and amusing retelling of this story. I am looking forward to seeing more of your writing.
Wonderful story, well done! You brought about a different perspective that bears more study and prayer.