The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice imagary. Good comparison. I'm a bit new to the genres used on this site but this may be more suited for childrens fantasy than for science fiction. Still I love the analogy and it would do great if made into an illustrated childrens book.
Very good rendition of the butterfly. Interesting.
This was a delightful read. Keep writing!
What a perfect story for an illustrated children's book. It has a great lesson, and is adorably written. I'm not sure it's quite on topic for sci-fi, but it's a good read. Well done.
I agree with comments on this being a great children's piece! I loved the dialouge and the title of "Fuzz ball" caught my attention. I didn't guess they were worms until you mentioned it though. Pretty good.
You write so well, and create such winsome little characters! I enjoyed reading this and appreciated the message. I agree this would be a delightful illustrated storybook for more than just the children!