The Official Writing Challenge
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This has a load of character. I'd love to read your diary and find out what other adventures you are having.
I love your MC's pep talk. What a character! :)
A droll commentary on the some of the things that tourists never have to face. I especially enjoyed the quip about speaking in the fourth person. At a couple of points I felt that you got a bit preachy and as such your diary technique was becoming a tad forced. But otherwise an amusing and very different approach.
I really enjoyed the MC in this story! Very personable and lively to read.
I enjoyed your MC's little pep talk. Very funny. Good Job!
Hi Charlie. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, "Love Is," actually did very well in the Africa Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 6th in that Level. (Just one off receiving an award). Competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

Again, well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)