The Official Writing Challenge
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Very interesting, detailed and descriptive. I liked the ending "find me". This would be easier to read if the paragraphs were (double) spaced. Quick paced story though. God bless ya, littlelight
I agree with littlelight about making it easier to read physically. Is this a different view of the recent news story? Why is it we feel so little compassion when we watch the news? Have our hearts become hard? Thanks for writing this
Very interesting - a little formatting for an easier read would make it even better. A nice start for a longer story :)