The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/09
Your story is a very good take on the topic. So like the Lord to put His messengers in just the right places. I enjoyed it.
06/02/09
I'd encourage you to use all 750 words, and to develop your story fully. This has lots of promise!
06/04/09
Good story! I dont know what the "el" is and so if you want this story to have a international readership (I live in UK) then think about this. I really enjoyed the story and this was the only part I didnt relate to!