The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/09
What an eye opening story! Very good.

The crash scene sounds a little stiff to me. But I have a hard time writing intense scenes...the words just don't come to me very good.

Other than that it was good!
09/08/09
There's always hope as long as someone is alive. Good story.