The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/09
nice reference to the blue shirt and redemption. the sentence structure was a bit fragmented. watch the spelling, too. but a good story. it would be interesting to see this developed into something larger. thanks for sharing. :)
10/17/09
This account helps us to see a little more of what Christ did for us on the cross.
10/19/09
This was a special story. Space between your paragraphs.It will be easier to read. Keep writing.
thanks for your criticism
Indeed, our crucified and risen Saviour and Lord Jesus Christ paid the high cost for our own sin, so that we might be saved.

Jesus meekly and patiently pursued death on that cross, in
obedience to the Father.

Nmandi repented and found grace and mercy of GOD. And surrendered his life to the Saviour Jesus!

Keep writing for the honour and glory of God.

Thanks!