The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an absolutely captivating story. What a treat to read this, this morning! I would caution you about two things I noticed; one is that you forget at times to use punctuation where it is needed, and the other is I noticed words that wouldn't be picked up by spell check since they were used incorrectly, i.e., know one vs. no one and to vs. too. Wonderful story! Loved it!
You do make a wonderful story-writer and story-teller! I enjoyed your writing very much!

I could see that you enjoyed writing it. I wish I could write something like that, captivating and humorous... (smile).

Keep writing for God's honour and glory.

Thank you for your entry.