The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/05
I liked you entry except that I am not a woman according to it. I pack light and don't wear much makeup. Personaly I think people should be careful of overgeneralizing.
Sorry you feel I've overgeneralized. I don't pack that way either, but I think the stereotype is hilarious, so that's why I used it. It also makes a great reference to what God does in our lives. Sorry if I made you feel like you were "not a woman" because of your lack of luggage. This was not the point.
08/25/05
Good analogy and writing. Although, personally, I believe we will still have baggage going into heaven. When perfection is revealed and we are changed that's when the baggage is gone forever. IMHO.
08/25/05
I love your last line! What blessed hope!
08/25/05
Drat! I kept hoping the airline would lose my emotional baggage - now you tell me they can't! :)
08/26/05
Great little story about taking our eyes off of the material things of the world and setting them on the reaching the souls of man for furthurance of the Gospel! Wonderful!
08/27/05
"All of our pains of the past must step aside as we step into our eternal life with God. 'You can't take it with you.'" A wonderful message of HOPE as we look forward to that day!
08/27/05
Well thought out and presented clean and neat. Smooth delivery.
08/29/05
Thankfully I will be glad to leave my bags at the door! Nice entry
08/29/05
Very well written lesson :) Good job!