The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 488 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
12/08/09
You certainly covered a wide variety of brown :D Especially like that last stanza (of course ;D). Nicely done!
12/09/09
Great descriptions. The first four stanzas flowed very nicely, but the meter kind of fell apart toward the end. However, you are off to a great start. Keep up the good work!
12/22/09
I like the scenes you paint here. I agree you are off to a good start (actually, a very good start). Keep writing and God bless!