The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my, I can barely type through my tears. This touch the deepest recesses of my heart. How blessed you are to have such a mother.
what a beautifull and sweet, and convicting story. How wonderful to have a mother like that. I too, had a mother like that, but she has gone on to be with Jesus. What a job to think of seeing her again someday!
Sorry for that typo in my comment! Of course, I meant JOY!
This is very lyrical writing.

I was confused for quite a while about the relationship between the narrator and MaryEllen. Maybe if that were established earlier?

How blessed you were to have her in your life!
Hello my kindred sister...this is eloquently beautiful in every respect. God has truly blessed you with the ability to convey His deep love within us and for us. What a blessing to be the daughter of such a heart for God, mother.