The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/10
I notice no one else has commented, so I am not sure if I am the only one who does not understand the story, but I am sorry I don't understand what happened at all.
02/19/10
On second thought, I think perhaps you meant to say that you asked him about his Play Boy? That would make sense if so.
02/20/10
Cute story of an embarrassing mix up in terminology. We older folks do it so often that there are skits about it on Saturday Night Live.
You have the gift of writing. I identify with you about speaking boldly about our Lord Jesus, and living it through and through.

I appreciate it when mothers echo that humble sheltering of our children, done in the Spirit of Christ, and for His children's sake.

What happened at the park? Why was Jenny afraid to be found out about something?

I'm happy for the MC how the ending turned out.

God bless you in all your endeavor in your writing, for His honour and glory.

Thank you.