The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/10
Very, very powerful with some excellent descriptions. This story kept me engaged throughout.
Wow! What a story. What a lot of emotions.

When I was reading it it seemed sort of fuzzy in my mind. I don't think I understood what his gift was until I went back and reread it. After that it became more clear, and I really enjoyed it.
This is a beautiful story about an empath. Your vivid descriptions pulled me into the story.
Congratulations in placing in the top 15 of your level. Good job!