The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/10
Oh, what a beautiful and touching story. Whether I'm right or wrong, I picture this story being true, and that you are the daughter, and my eyes get moist.

What a deeply sincere tale of inspiration. Makes me want to visit the pond, but then, I wouldn't see the same thing would I?

Your writing is gorgeous, and phrases like, "In his reflection he saw his life moving slowly and wondered where it had gone." moved me.

Two thumbs up!
Well written and extremely enjoyable. Your descriptions were very real and I felt as though I was standing behind one of the trees, watching his memories swirl in the water. I watched as the bond between father and daughter grew and the block which stopped him from writing was cleared away as his daughter wrote. Great entry, well done!
Absolutely beautiful. I have tears in my eyes because of all the love that flowed between the father and daughter. A fantastic touching story. Good job.
So descriptive. I love some of your descriptions. There is a lot of feeling here too. I think you did a great job.