The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/10
This story reaches back and brings forward the sweetness of yesteryear - the unhurried commitment and godness of men whose eyes were fixed on Jesus. I always leave with a rested clean feeling after reading such a piece.
Then you bought in the present and showed you have the knack of drawing, in word pictures, a collection of hearts drawn together around the central theme of keeping their eyes on Jesus.
Limited to 750 words you are a sketch artist but evocative none the less. Lovely!
This is an interesting story that intertwines the past with the present. You had some problems with using the quotation marks, but your message still rang true.