The Official Writing Challenge
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09/19/05
I really liked your ironic title, and the ending that avoided the cliche that I was expecting. Good job.
09/20/05
try level 2 next time! I don't think you need all the hyphens: so-much-so; calcium-crusted...
09/20/05
also, less-than-appealing..
09/20/05
Good descriptions, some grammar problems but nothing to worry about. Very interesting approach, worth reading again.
09/22/05
That was horrible - but in such a GOOD way! :) You made me cry and I desperately want the story to continue!!!
09/23/05
Good job -with that glimmer of hope at the end.
09/26/05
Brandi, this was VERY good. I was quite surprised that you didnt' tie it all up with a neat bow at the end and give us a rosy conclusion. But you left the question hanging, with a big dose of hope. Well done. You ranked 12th in the Level 1 listings, so give yourself a pat on the back. That's very good when you think there were 44 entries for that level. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)