The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful pace and gripping! Well told and unique in that I could feel not only the MC's emotions, but the husband, daughter and Paramedic too. Also really like your open ending. This is definitely a story that would have me consumed with overpowering anticipation and running out the door to buy the sequel if it were part of a book!
08/28/10
Excellent, just enough suspense to keep us gasping and leave us wondering. Keep writing.
This definitely has a conflict and is filled with suspense. I liked the open ending. We are often tempted to wrap everything into a happy ending, but that's not how life always works.
01/21/11
Just had to go read a writing of yours, and this was really superb! It was a gripping story, and so well done. Wish I had time to read all of your articles.