The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful poetry, nearly perfect in both rhyme and meter, and with a sweet message to complete the package. Bravo!
Jan's right. Nice message. Lovely and tingly in all the right places.
Lovely take on a beautiful story. Keep up the good work!
I'm not sure if it was the poetry picking up strength as you moved along, or if it was just the emotion of this beautiful story. Regardless, you did a really great job! Keep it up!
Beautiful, just beautiful. A pleasure to read such a special poem. Great job!
Very nice! I liked seeing the story from the innkeeper's perspective.
Well done! As Jan said, almost perfect in rhyme and meter - just a few minor changes and it would be perfect.
Loved these lines:
'And would you have me leave the guests Im serving? / she questioned as I stood before her there.'
How many are too busy for Him or allow the world to distract them from serving Him. Beautiful!

Linda, not surprisingly, this was lovely. I was judging last week, and you rated very highly with me. Keep up the great writing. You are a delight. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)