The Official Writing Challenge
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This is quite a synopsis on the topic. You have much to say, and it's all very good. To make an easier read, it would help to break it up into paragraphs.
great writing but i agree with the other comment. if you spread it out into paragraphs it will make it easier to read and it will look less squashed and hurried as well.
look through a few of the other entries to get the idea.
your content is great so this is only a small point...
This little sermonette has some great advice in it. Try dividing it into several smaller paragraphs and double-space them. You have a great message and just a little white space will make it easier to read.