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I loved the story. Some of the details in the beginning need a little work along with some puncuation issues . With a few changes this story would be perfect. Loved the dresses and the way Gods Word reflected in the colors. The end was Beautiful.
Thank God for Godly grandma's. My kids are going to their Nana's this weekend and are counting the hours. Your story made me tear up, beautifully done!
Warm, loving memories here, and some good instruction, too. Nice job!
what a precious delightful story. I had a grandma a little like that, she taught me to knit and sew and tie my shoelaces as well as being a Godly lady and had often made ragdolls or similar for my two sisters and I
Very touching and has such warmth of heart. Reignites my desire to be an influential grandparent.
I love the relationship between the little girl and Grandma. I lived next to my grandparents when I was growing up. I remember the Bible stories they played on the old record player.

Thank you for stirring up such happy memories.
I really loved this story and the message(s) that went with it. Nice job!
A very touching story. You painted a beautiful picture with words.
Beautifully told. Sweet and simple with a lot of truth. Great job!
Good job! This brought tears to my eyes. It reminds me of a great aunt, I visited in Iowa every year. Her prayers, I am sure, are what led me to my salvation many years later. Good message about the importance of family and the passing on of Christian values.
Wonderful, touching love story between Grandma and child, and between a Father and His children. Thank you for sharing.
What a sweet story of the love between Gramma and Louise. Congratulations for placing 12th in level one!
Thank-you everyone for your positive comments. It is very encouraging to have people read and enjoy my writing! God Bless!