The Official Writing Challenge
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01/28/11
i wish I knew why this little girl had lost her parents.A touching and precious story.
I wonder if you tried to cram too much into this. It felt like it needed to be a much longer story to do it justice.
01/29/11
A beautiful story that I feel could offer a whole lot more to the reader by spending more time sharing specifics that had been overcome in each growing season. I realize that would go over the word limit, but have you thought of doing it in "growing" sections? I liked that it did show deep family commitment and love.
02/02/11
A touching story! Sadly, many little ones are being raised by grandparents. God bless you! Love the story!
It sounds like Grandma did A great job. It's too bad she died without realizing how important she was to her granddaughter.Congratulations for placing 14th in level one!