The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/11
Poignant. There is a lot here that could be developed. Mom got saved but that didn't insure her against divorce. Daughter had difficulties that didn't end in divorce ... because two people were committed? Wondering about the choice to write this in reverse. Did the daughter reverse the legacy of divorce? I liked this.
01/31/11
This was very cleverly written but very sad at the same time. Good job.
01/31/11
unusual in the reverse timeline.
i wonder why you chose to do the life backwards.
clever take on the theme none the less
I like this. It is a more interesting read using reverse chronology than it would have been otherwise. Nice!
I like this. It is original and fresh. I liked the title-it showed no matter new old ya were Divorce was a bad word. The simplicity of it spoke volumes.Congratulations for placing 13th in level one!