The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story. I know for sure theHoly Spirit can whisper in a believer's ear and get them to pray for someone, and prayer is very powerful indeed!
great story cleverly told!
It reminded me of the Screwtape Letters by C.S. Lewis.

It is important to remember that we war with darkness every day.

Your story was carefully crafted and interesting to read.
I really loved this story. You really keep the reader on the edge, and with a great ending. The only thing you need to watch for are typos - e.g. "through on her robe" instead of "threw" - a very minor error inside an otherwise brilliant story.