The Official Writing Challenge
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interesting.... i like the way the character made the journal her own, there were some unanswered questions in my mind that left me a little puzzled.
I really enjoyed this story, and only wish that there was a bigger word count to expand it further. A really great concept that was enjoyable to read.
I liked how reading one diary inspired the mc to write in her own. You showed her love of reading and theist for knowledge. I think your story would have been even better if you had shown the reader some of the diary entries. But you created a charming character and did a nice job with the topic.
The main character was very likeable. I'm glad you showed the reader how important journaling is.
This was a nice slice of life in the day of the MC. I too, would have enjoyed a more detailed glimpse into what was contained in the diaries. All in all, good job--definitely keep writing, and journaling.
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