The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful poem in four line stanzas that maintain their rhythm throughout. I like too how you compare yourself to the rose as you wait for God's work to unfold.
Beautiful! I like poetic verse. Your idea is well expressed.
Consistent in both rhyme and meter: bravo!
Very disciplined use of rhyme and meter and I like the comparisons too. God bless.
Ok chicken, time to stop clucking!!! With a poem this good, you have nooo reason to be afraid. :) From now on, we're gonna expect you to HINT, HINT, HINT!!! Good job! :)
Ditto to all of the above. This was so good. Well done.
How true! God opens us one petal at a time. To blossom as we should. Good job! Great meter.
Very good and enjoyable to read. Great thoughts for us to ponder.
Enjoyed this well written poem. You make your point clearly without forced rhymes.
Beautiful. Well done.
Just beautiful, Laurie! Lovely and inspiring! I always enjoy reading your poetry.