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You make a great case for your dad's "side" of things. Perhaps time and maturity- and maturity in the Lord has helped. BUT - thankfully - the Lord looks on the heart for I'm afraid none of us would "make the cut" on outward appearances alone! Thanks for sharing.
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I love it when kids realize they are turning into their parents. It's amazing how maturity can help us see things in a new light!
I have to side with you and your dad on this one. I can't stand the drooping pants either. Some kids wear them so low, that they don't cover anything.

I am glad that fads will some day pass away; I just hope the next fad won't get any worse. However, its nice to know that most people that mature, don't practice them anyway.
Great story! Congrats on winning the Challenge Bonus Prize. You will find it extremely helpful! I did! God bless!
woo! you have the bonus feedback prize so do you really need my comments as well? Outlandish clothes and teenagers are of course a great subject for this theme. I like the way you explore this. I felt the first sentence about your fingers seemed a bit random and unecessary actually. otherwise great humor and well written. title could have been a bit snappier to draw the readers attention to the funny side of the piece and help it stand out from the pack.
Congratulations for placing 7th in level one!

I really liked this story. I thought you would place in the top five. Winning the prize will be invaluable to you.