The Official Writing Challenge
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Yes, there comes a time when we truly desire to leave this world behind.

I had a little trouble understanding where the death of the other younger girl actually added to the storyline, and felt that it would have needed to be a little further developed.
I do realise that it is difficult to everything we would wish to in so few words.
This is a beautiful testimony to all of the lost little Susies
heart rending and heart felt .... touched my heartstrings and bought a tear. good writing