The Official Writing Challenge
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This is was an interesting entry. You reminded me of a vacation full of rain I could have written about. Oh well, to late now. :) Good job and nice descriptions!
That was great! " the sound of rain tiptoeing across the balcony ledge of our room"--I love it! Good job!
I feel like I've just taken a trip to Israel with the added blessing of rain...bows. Wonderful entry!
10/28/05
You conveyed your story nicely. Thanks for sharing.
10/28/05
I really enjoyed reading this! You took me to a place I would love to visit and interweaved God throughout so effortlessly. Good job and well done.
Beautifully done. You transported me there - I felt that all I had to do was raise my eyes from my computer and I would be able to see the sights. Can't decide what line I like best. Is it "the sound of rain tiptoeing across the balcony ledge" or "the sea was still a jewel of Israel"? Hope you share more writings about your travels. Well done.
10/28/05
You painted a beautiful picture of the land and what you saw! I was intrigued to read about their lack of rain. The rainbow made for a nice ending!
10/28/05
Great story! I've long wanted to travel to Israel and still hope to someday with my family. Thanks for describing its appearance and your spiritual senses so vividly.
10/28/05
Sounds like somewhere I'd like to visit. It seems that the people of the land were thankful for the rain as well. Thanks for sharing this well written piece:)
10/29/05
Thank you for the trip! Nice ending even for those whose 'glass was half empty.' Good job!
10/29/05
Good description, and a nice recounting of your trip.
10/31/05
YEAH!!! Wonderful!!! : ) Way to go :)
Very well done, Brandi. Congratulations on your first place finish! As usual, when I read your entries, they end too soon... and so I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
10/31/05
Congratulations Brandi, Lovely descriptions of your trip to Israel. Nicely done!!! God bless ya, littlelight
Great descriptions and a wonderful illustration of the fact that our inconvenience may be another's blessing. After a long draught God relieved Israel's great need on your vacation--glad you didn't mind! :) Congratulations!
11/01/05
Brandi, congratulations on your great win! Time to move up to Level 2, if you haven't already.

You also ranked 25th out of 147 entries, which is excellent for a Level 1 entry. Well done! Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
11/01/05
Wonderful! So excited for you, dear! Way to go! Be encouraged and keep writing!!!!
Congratulations!!
11/02/05
It was beautiful. You did a wonderful work here. You spoke the truth, made it easy to read and added a lift in my heart.
Love and blessings are coming your way! - praise Jesus!
I love it. Thank you and Congrats, you beautiful girl!
You wrote so beautifully it was as if I were there along with you. Thank you for a lovely "trip" to Israel!
Carol