The Official Writing Challenge
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This is was an interesting entry. You reminded me of a vacation full of rain I could have written about. Oh well, to late now. :) Good job and nice descriptions!
That was great! " the sound of rain tiptoeing across the balcony ledge of our room"--I love it! Good job!
I feel like I've just taken a trip to Israel with the added blessing of rain...bows. Wonderful entry!
You conveyed your story nicely. Thanks for sharing.
I really enjoyed reading this! You took me to a place I would love to visit and interweaved God throughout so effortlessly. Good job and well done.
Beautifully done. You transported me there - I felt that all I had to do was raise my eyes from my computer and I would be able to see the sights. Can't decide what line I like best. Is it "the sound of rain tiptoeing across the balcony ledge" or "the sea was still a jewel of Israel"? Hope you share more writings about your travels. Well done.
You painted a beautiful picture of the land and what you saw! I was intrigued to read about their lack of rain. The rainbow made for a nice ending!
Great story! I've long wanted to travel to Israel and still hope to someday with my family. Thanks for describing its appearance and your spiritual senses so vividly.
Sounds like somewhere I'd like to visit. It seems that the people of the land were thankful for the rain as well. Thanks for sharing this well written piece:)
Thank you for the trip! Nice ending even for those whose 'glass was half empty.' Good job!
Good description, and a nice recounting of your trip.
YEAH!!! Wonderful!!! : ) Way to go :)
Very well done, Brandi. Congratulations on your first place finish! As usual, when I read your entries, they end too soon... and so I'm looking forward to reading more from you.
Congratulations Brandi, Lovely descriptions of your trip to Israel. Nicely done!!! God bless ya, littlelight
Great descriptions and a wonderful illustration of the fact that our inconvenience may be another's blessing. After a long draught God relieved Israel's great need on your vacation--glad you didn't mind! :) Congratulations!
Brandi, congratulations on your great win! Time to move up to Level 2, if you haven't already.

You also ranked 25th out of 147 entries, which is excellent for a Level 1 entry. Well done! Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Wonderful! So excited for you, dear! Way to go! Be encouraged and keep writing!!!!
It was beautiful. You did a wonderful work here. You spoke the truth, made it easy to read and added a lift in my heart.
Love and blessings are coming your way! - praise Jesus!
I love it. Thank you and Congrats, you beautiful girl!
You wrote so beautifully it was as if I were there along with you. Thank you for a lovely "trip" to Israel!