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Nicely told - great ending! So Bryan learned true humility in his embarrassment. And the MC learned her lesson as well.

Good story! God bless~
Good riddance to bad rubbish. Alarms bells should have been ringing, treatin the waiters badly - but then love is blind. Good story! Enjoyed!
A well written story! The MC character was very believable and when the tables turned at the end I wanted to give a fist pump in the air and say "you go girl!"

Nicely done.
This is a quite story. You drew me in right away. I think you did a good job covering the topic and told a story, many of us can relate to. The ending was kind of sudden. The most embarrassing part was how the MC reacted. It is true, when we get hurt we are awful spiteful, instead of being loving and kind. That's the worst embarrassment!