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When I started reading, I'm sure a look of horror passed over my face. But when I got to the end and saw it tied all together it was seen as a very descriptive way of understanding what Jesus went through. I liked how you connected the two holidays together too, as you can't have one without the other.
04/13/12
Sometimes when I see a short entry, I wonder about the content before beginning to read it. I was pleasantly surprised at your entry, however. I was unable to at first visualize what was happening to these children. Your connection between the Christmas and Easter brought me back to your message. I found the way you wrote this very intriguing. Good job.
04/14/12
Great job...very clever and excellent job of bringing this short, yet powerful story to a conclusion.

God Bless~