The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a precious story. You really tugged at my heart. You did a fine job of developing the conflict and building suspense. The ending was nice too. God is still in the miracle business.
Laura, this is beautiful. My son is a policeman and has a heart for the homeless. I just love this and it should be a winner! God Bless you.

What a heart tugger!
Your sad, sweet story gives a new meaning to the phrase "junk food." As I read, I could picture the abandoned warehouse and Gabriella and Isabella huddling inside. I'm so glad there was a happy ending for them! Great job! :)
Congratulations for ranking 6th in level one! Happy Dance!