The Official Writing Challenge
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Easy to follow thoughts.

Nice layout.

You enjoyed doing this.
So beautiful. Love the very simple phrasing although the thoughts behind them are not simple at all, but very deep and mindful. Wonderful entry.
I like the soft tone of this poem. Punctuation would have helped - putting it where it would be used in prose. Even though you never used the word "Expect" the thought is there. It might be better to emphasize it a little stronger for the Challenge. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
I got so lost in the beautiful words of this one. Peace and tranquility were mine as I read your glorious directions in which to live by. I have found recently that waiting on God gives me such a sense of peace, just as your lovely poem did. You have a fine gift for writing for the Lord. Excellence in faith!
Loved this communing with one's soul to bring faith and encouragement to get through the day living for Jesus. Lovely devotional.
Very nice job! I'm glad you finally jumped in. I love how you ended it. "Wait on me." :) Something I need to always remember.
Engaging, lovely, powerful, peaceful, mesmerizing, and beautifully done.

Thank you! I loved this.

God bless~
Wow this is a powerful piece. It is filled with elegance and hope and touched my heart deeply.
This is a delightful and faith filled devotional. 'The messy gears of my mind, begin their endless grind.' I certainly identified with those lines. A powerful piece that will speak to many people. I'd like to read more of your work.