The Official Writing Challenge
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Touching story that pulled at my heartstrings. This was well written with tender and believable dialogue between the MC and child.

Beautiful job.
God bless~
Yes, God's Holy Spirit that he gives us when we are baptized for the forgiveness of our sin will guide us and help us grow to be the person he wants us to be. Because of his love for us we can have a love for him that will cause us to want to obey his commandments. "If you love me, keep my commandments."

Young people need to be taught to be faithful till death and it may take our example to be that lesson.

Keep writing.