The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/14
I was wondering if someone was going to use "Eve" as an example of the "first world problem" -- well written and well done.

Good job.

God bless~
04/25/14
Wow! You may be in the beginners group but you're most definitely not a "beginner" writer. Powerful story with strong visualization. Well done.
Thinking there should be more brings discontentment which breeds greed.

This is a well written take on the garden scene.

Satan is still "Eye level" with us so we still have to watch out. Today's world problems are so attractive.
04/27/14
Great descriptions and a powerful retelling of a well-known story. Keep up the good work!