The Official Writing Challenge
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08/09/14
WOW! Great story with a whimsical and powerful ending! I really enjoyed the banter between the two MC's and the plot itself.

Well done!

God bless~
Into the future with a twist.

I always worry/think about who is going to copy something the see or read but then this is just a story.

Well written. I don't know how it would have worked if you would have revealed the switch after the shooting of the arrow. It might have been OK also but by knowing about the switch the readers still didn't know which person might have been the target.
08/10/14
Great story.

It kept me reading even though I thought it was too predictable.

I know you have the ability and would have liked to see a little Russian dialect to spice up the conversation.

It would have enhanced your very good dialogue and get the readers really in the mood of two distinct personalities from two countries.

Super job!
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