The Official Writing Challenge
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You did a really nice job on this difficult topic. You tackled it head on while not getting too risqué. You pulled me in with your depth of the MC and dialog.
Well written and certainly on topic. You did a fantastic job speaking about a subject that is often hard to speak about, let alone write so magnificently.

Excellent writing here!

Loved how you tied it together very strongly upon closing.

God bless~
Well written and believable. Right off it seemed as if non-fiction. You created a compelling entry here.
This is very well written to be in the beginning level. You had me fooled into thinking this was a true story and that's a mark of good story telling. But I was relieved to see it was fiction.

One suggestion: You might want to indicate the gender of the MC toward the beginning of the piece.

Your subject matter is current for contemporary issues, and I like the way you showed how the problem can be overcome, filling the mind with God's word. I look forward to reading your next entry. Keep up the great work!
Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level! Happy Dance!