The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/15
I like your sense of irony here. From your title, the milk is obviously pressing you to fulfil your very well-described need for these cookies - and you have only succumbed this time because you're actually saving money! Who could ever blame you???
Great writing.
01/23/15
I like your sense of irony here. From your title, the milk is obviously pressing you to fulfil your very well-described need for these cookies - and you have only succumbed this time because you're actually saving money! Who could ever blame you???
Great writing.
01/24/15
I was smiling at the imagery! Who hasn't been guilty of such an act let them throw the first stone!

Well done, I enjoyed it.

God bless~
Loved the story! The descriptions are vivid and made me feel as if I were there. Now I want some Oreos. Well done!
01/24/15
Great imagery - and so believable! I hope you do well on this entry!
01/25/15
A well-written scrumptious piece of writing that had me laughing out loud. Ok. Maybe the biscuits sound a little tempting, even though I don't like Oreo cookies AT ALL... but hey, the description of that love affair?! Hmmm maybe I'll just relate it to chocolate...
01/26/15
WWW.BUYOREOCHEAP.COOKIES.COM

INTERESTING STORY
A real life fantasy that many live out.

Nicely done with vivid pictures, sounds, smells and tastes.

And we do blame our sin of gluttony on the advertiser instead of our lack of discipline.

Nice work
01/29/15
Congrats!

God Bless~