The Official Writing Challenge
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02/26/15
This story is told with both warmth and authenticity. It brought back memories of my father sitting in the stands at my track meets. However, the paragraphs need double spaces between them.
03/02/15
Awww, this was such a moving and emotional piece. I loved the interaction with the characters which spoke volumes. Well done.

God bless~
03/03/15
A good story. Double spacing between paragraphs would enhance the look of your work. Somehow, I thought the end was a little tame.