The Official Writing Challenge
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Creative approach to the topic. Well-written and inspiring!

God Bless
04/10/15
I love this. It was very poetic, and had a spiritual sense of reality to it. Remember to double space in between each paragraph. Great Job and keep writing.
04/12/15
Nicely done, good job. One comment: in the sentence "My eyes are focused; my heart sober; my spirit alert" - I would replace the semi-colons with commas. (Just a suggestion.)
04/13/15
Excellent and so uplifting!
Thank you!

God bless~
This was an uplifting story. It was written like a psalm. I thought the poem in the middle was uplifting.