The Official Writing Challenge
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Very clever way to use the alphabet one -word lists to give the reader the over all image of " children" as your longing! Interesting and fun to read.
Red Ink: possibly cut the list a little and add more at the end to let the reader in on why infertility has been a blessing. Why is it well with your soul?
Clever way to introduce your longing for a child (using the alphabet), but ending with your contentment in the sovereign will of God.
Very poignant poem using the acrostic style. I know how painful it is to long for a child to nuture and love. I am content knowing that God sacrificing his only son Jesus to show his love is more than enough to satisfy my longing soul.
Oh my...your entry is beyond touching and beautifully written expressly from your heart.

God bless you~