The Official Writing Challenge
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05/13/15
The words seem to flow in this piece as I spoke the words it became my own prayer.

I did notice in this sentence in the fourth stanza, "Before Iím to tired and to old." It should have been written "I'm too tired and too old." You may already have noticed. Also "a new" in the sixth stanza should have been written "anew."

This did not stop the spirit behind this beautiful piece of poetry. Keep writing for the glory of God.