The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/15
I really liked the title of the piece. I thought you needed a little more transition between the end of the story and the history of the Dead Sea Scrolls. It was well-researched, however.

Red Ink: I think you needed the word of in the last sentence.
08/16/15
Well written account of finding the Dead Sea Scrolls. I like the last line.
08/17/15
This was a nice surprise! This a well written piece! Good stuff here:) You should be happy with this piece:) I think it will do well:)
08/19/15
I think more detail was needed. That 750 word cut-off probably is the guilty party.
08/20/15
Congratulations on your 2nd place Beginner award.