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10/08/15
A nice retelling of the familiar story and it fits very well with the theme
10/08/15
A wonderful story. You use description very well.

This will be an encouragement for those who feel the same way as the tax collector. Great job.

All the best. :)
10/09/15
Wonderful retelling of this Bible story. Very descriptive.
10/09/15
Great approach and wonderful timely reminder of how restorative faith is when we believe in Him with all of our heart and soul.

Excellent work.

God bless~
Well written Bible story.

Always be sure the time line of events are as accurate as possible.

Kids always need Bible stories.

Get some "public" pictures and make a power point presentation for a class at your church.
10/15/15
Keep up the good work.
10/15/15
I enjoyed reading your work-as always. Good job!
Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level. Happy Dance!
10/16/15
Congratulations on your sixth place in the Beginner's category.