The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/15
What a lovely testimony of God's timely provision. I enjoyed reading it.
10/26/15
You combined two separate stories to convey the same message. Creative. Keep writing.
10/26/15
I liked the way you used something from hundreds of years ago and then brought it into the present. In the first part I noticed several changes of verb tense so that may be something you need to be aware of.
The Lord's prayer has this line: "give us this day our daily bread". If he wants us to pray for the little things, I would say we should pray for the big things also.

Well written piece that points out our need to remember to pray for and about things that may be troubling us.
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