The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/15
Your advice is the truth, and it is nicely put. All your words are good reminders to everyone.
11/13/15
Your advice is the truth, and it is nicely put. All your words are good reminders to everyone.
I like how you started with the wrong more in the beginning, yet in the end you showed what we really want and need more of. You made some great points in this lovely piece.
11/17/15
Your poem demonstrates to us the things we need to have less of and those we need more of. Very good ideas.