The Official Writing Challenge
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This one definitely made me think; as I am sure you intended. A very good reminder of the depth of His love!
I really enjoyed your musings. I have often had quite similar thoughts. I'd urge you not to overuse punctuation like the ellipses. For me, it distracted me from your wonderful message. I'd also urge you to find a good proofreader. If you don't have someone, try to let your piece alone for a day or two and then go over it again. The topic might have been a bit of a stretch, but your wonderful message is so good, it didn't matter to me as much. You explained it in a way that is easy to understand.
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