The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/15
I used to tell my daughter bed time stories. I am sure she would have enjoyed hearing this one as much as I enjoyed reading it.
12/04/15
This is so sweet. Brings back memories of mom telling me bedtime stories.

Keep writing!
12/04/15
Cute. Well done.
12/04/15
Awww~

This was touching, sweet and hearfelt. What a lovely way of thanking and honoring your mom! Excellent job...thanks for sharing.

God bless~
12/04/15
I love this adorable story, and the pertinent lesson you wove through its words.
12/05/15
Nothing like a good bedtime story. I liked my mom used to read them to me.
12/06/15
This is a lovely story told with lots of love. Thanks for sharing about your mom's storytelling.
A child's story with a message and a purpose.

The message is we should love others that might be different while the purpose is to put someone to sleep.

Well told.
I enjoyed this story within in a story. I found it delightful and could easily picture the illustrations that go with it. Remember to start new paragraphs each time someone different speaks, even within the story. I thought this flowed quite nicely and left me with a nice smile on my face. Children's stories is favorite genres.
12/10/15
Ingrid, I loved your story...so happy for your story getting recognition.

Congrats!

God bless~
Ingrid, I loved how you adapted one of the bedtime stories your mom used to tell into your own. It was a cute, adorable story.
12/16/15
Ingrid - Congratulations. I learned the hard way that an HC really does mean something.

I'm proud of you. God bless.